Descriptive writing paper

In my Language Arts class we are currently going over yet again descriptive writing, one of my favorite things to do in that class. =) Here is the first paper I have written in this category this semester. The prompt was describe a hard rain fall.
The wind blasted through the tree tops, causing them to hiss in protest. Dark gray billowing clouds slot out the sun, leaving everything seemingly colorless. Those fat clouds release their heavy burdens, drenching all those below. Every rain drop hits the ground, roves, pavement, and people with its own little beat; thus creating nature's drumbeat. The ground is soon soaked, therefor adding its color drain to the dreary scene. More and more rain falls, seeming to be dumped from buckets down to the cold Earth by heavenly angels.
Tell my what you thought and what I can do better in the future. Love you my little Earthlets! Keep on reading.
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